Today we tried something new.We marched down to High wire and participated in a rotation. First we played games. Capture the flag and cat and mouse with chairs. Then our teacher changed her smile grew wicked, the gleam in her eyes was scary. I started to wait for my pizza. I could smell the pizza it smells yummy but not when I saw my friends pizza with worms in it I was about to vomit. When I got my pizza it had chicken feet in my pizza I am never going to eat this again.
Thank you for sharing your pizza story. I can see you have used exaggeration making your story more interesting. Remember to leave a space after a full stop. It is amusing how you were looking forward to your pizza thanks to the smell until you saw it. This is great visualisation.
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Thank you for sharing your pizza story. I can see you have used exaggeration making your story more interesting. Remember to leave a space after a full stop. It is amusing how you were looking forward to your pizza thanks to the smell until you saw it. This is great visualisation.
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