I enjoyed the disco because all of my friends were there. there was even a raffle basket. we were listing to lazy siren and other songs but when they were dancing it was funny. My friends brought their animal hats, they looked awesome.
It was awesome to see everyone having fun at the disco. Remember to check you work for capitals at the beginning of each sentence and spelling (listening). I was so busy that night I didn't get to dance. Did you have any other favourite songs they didn't play?
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It was awesome to see everyone having fun at the disco. Remember to check you work for capitals at the beginning of each sentence and spelling (listening). I was so busy that night I didn't get to dance. Did you have any other favourite songs they didn't play?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mrs Mundy, I did have another favorite songs that I wanted to play at the disco, Te iwi E and some more
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